Revising the Expository / Procedural Essay: Rhetorical Devices and Transitions

A. swatting flies with a New York City phone book 3
B. scrubbing the brown spots off potatoes. 4
C. raking leaves when the wind is blowing. 1
D. lifting a heavy baby out of a crib. 5
E. brushing the shiny coat of a thoroughbred horse. 2
1. Washing the windows without leaving any streaks is like 1
2. Polishing the chrome wheel covers on my car is like 2
3. Using a powerful vacuum cleaner on a small throw rug is like 3
4. Getting the stains off the sides of the bathtub is like 4
5. Pulling the spare tire out of the trunk is like 5