is better.
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A song for a rock band just would not feel complete without a part for the drums. You might think that the drum part just sort of happens, but like most everything, it requires a plan to make it a clear, coherent part of the song. Watch how this drum part looks when it is written out.
Now, we are ready to write the complete expository essay on the health benefits of walking vs. running. Looking over the two articles, the charts for each article, and the comparison chart, we have a wealth of information with which to write a strong multi-paragraph essay.
The goal when writing the essay is to make the paragraphs coherent, so the information is organized logically and the ideas flow smoothly from one to the next. The information in your charts will help dictate the length of your essay. Remember, no set rules exist for how many paragraphs you should write. I think the best way to organize the paragraphs might be from general to specific. My plan for organizing the essay looks like this:
Introduction: General information about walking and running and the fact that there is a debate about which one is better for your health
Body paragraph: General health benefits of both walking and running
Body paragraph: Recent findings on the debate about walking vs. running
Conclusion: Summing up the research and current beliefs on the debate
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Respond to the following questions. They will help you organize the expository essay titled “The Health Benefits of Walking vs. Running.”
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Whether you plan to write an expository essay, a song, or an informative or procedural essay, follow the three steps of synthesis to make your ideas flow together:
Step One: Analyze your sources.
Step Two: Pull out the major points you want to make from each one.
Step Three: Put all the information together into a
coherent essay.
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When you remember these three steps in writing an expository or procedural essay, it’s easy to go with the beat and create your own little ditty.