Should this phrase be rewritten?
Camp also
[eggs on]
[kids]
who
[are unhappy]
to set their own goals and work on
[improving their skills]
in a
[who-cares-what-you-do]
environment. Such challenges as swimming all the way out to the raft or
[refining their skills]
in a craft or leading a song before lunch give them opportunities to
[work their guts out] and succeed in new ways.
[Connecting],
[contributing],
and
[feeling like a big shot]
usually aren’t focuses of
[academic curricula]
They can’t be taught through a textbook or measured by standardized tests. Yet they are at the very heart of what it takes to be
[a biggie]
in life.