Pollution is bad for the environment.

Strong Thesis Statement

Weak Thesis Statement

next

Drug use is detrimental to society.

Strong Thesis Statement

Weak Thesis Statement

next

We should focus on ways to reduce oil consumption by making electric cars cheaper and making green energy more available.

Strong Thesis Statement

Weak Thesis Statement

next

At least 25% of the federal budget is spent on limiting pollution.

Strong Thesis Statement

Weak Thesis Statement

next

The 450 elementary schools in New York State that serve a mixed population of students are models for diversity because they recognize the cultural and religious backgrounds of all the students.

Strong Thesis Statement

Weak Thesis Statement

next

The school day should be longer so that students can practice extracurricular activities outside of the traditional school day in order to allow time for content classes.

Strong Thesis Statement

Weak Thesis Statement

next

All complete. Great job!






Ontrack logo